Just As You Left It
your shoes are just as you left them:
asymmetrical,
grass caught in creases of the soles,
laces untied,
scent of foot sweat–
subtle, not overpowering;
appearance neat.
inanimate objects imitate life
between these walls,
for my heart is just as you left it:
asymmetrical,
with one chamber heavier than the others;
unspoken words caught in creases of my soul,
future plans untied,
scent of body sweat caught in my bed–
subtle, not overpowering;
appearance neat.
intimate objects imitate love
between these walls.
All I can say about this poem is Wow!…just an excellent poem that is perfect in just about every way I can think about it.
July 13, 2010 at 11:23 pm
Thank you!
July 14, 2010 at 10:17 am
I love the play on inanimate vs. intimate objects. Beautiful work as usual, Farah ❤
July 15, 2010 at 9:53 am
Beautiful, all of it, every word. And the pic is fabulous as well. Such a strong voice you have honed over time, but filled with a glorious rainbow of emotions and realities.
Elizabeth
July 15, 2010 at 11:58 pm
you always have such a poignant way of phrasing things,… of using certain (sometimes everyday) images to paint a picture of emotions
this is so very wonderfully done with this one!
July 16, 2010 at 9:06 am
Wow I love this!
I came here completely by accident and in a kind of roundabout way, but I’m so glad I did 🙂 Thank you for publishing!
August 17, 2010 at 9:11 pm